高三英语作文写作技巧(1)
审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想、主题,并围绕中心思想组织材料。
高中英语作文写作技巧方法:构思并列出简单的提纲
审好题、立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事:安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。
高中英语作文写作技巧方法:扩展成文
根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题,千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。
在这一步骤中还需注意三方面问题:
1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样,才能保证所写段落不
偏题、不跑题。
2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排,避免段落内容的交叉。
3)用好连接词,注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明,思路清晰,
文字连贯,就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁,而连接词起的正是桥
梁作用。
在扩展的过程中也有些窍门,以下几点可供参考:
1)在整篇文章中,避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词,准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。同时要灵活运用各种句式,如
倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等,从而增加
文章的可读性。
2)使用不同长度的句子。如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话,通过分句和合句或用两
句、三句来表达,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
3)改变句子的开头方式,不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首,或
用分词等。
4)学会使用过渡词。
(1) 递进furthermore,moreover,besides,in addition,then,etc
(2) 转折however,but,nevertheless,afterwards,etc
(3) 总结finally,at last,in brief,to conclude,etc
(4) 强调really,indeed,certainly,surely,above a11,etc
(5) 对比in the same way,just as,on the other hand,etc
5)确定文章用第几人称写,基本时态是什么。使用人称时人物不能张冠李戴或指代不明。
时态要尽量保持一致。
4、检查修改:要检查复核,不要写完了事。
要留时间通读全文,修改可能出现的错误。检查上下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅,该用连词的地方用了没有,所用的连词是否合适,是否有语法错误,主谓是否一致,动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确,词组的搭配是否合乎习惯,是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等,还有就是注意卷面整洁。
可归纳为:中心突出,主题明确;层次清楚,条理清晰; 表达力强,传情达意;语句通顺,句型多变;过渡自然,衔接紧凑;标点正确,大小无误;字迹清楚,卷面整洁。
高三英语作文写作技巧(2)
1、称谓:
无职衔的男子: wang/zhang
已婚女子:mrs wang/zhao
未婚女子:miss wang/zhang
博士: zhang
教授: lin
还有一些表示感情色彩的词。
如:dear smith/dear madam/dear sir
2、正文
正文要从称谓的下一行写起,可以和称谓齐头写,也可以向内缩五个字母写。正文就是要具体地写你想表达的内容,要注意表达清楚、简练,让收信人很容易得知你要表达的内容。
3、结束语:
结束语写在正文的下方,另起一行。常用的结束语有:
best wishes!/ good luck!/give my best wishes to your family!/looking forward to your reply!
4、签名:
sincerely yours/yours sincerely/truly yours/yours respectfully/respectfully yours
例文一:下面是一个叫kurt的人写给父母的家书。
17th
dear mother and father,
i feel very excited at the thought that in another week i shall be with you again on i have enjoyed my stay in england very much dowson and my fellow students are all very nice to but, as they say in england, “there’s no place like home,” and i think one feels this above all at christmas
i am leaving here early on thursday, the 23rd, and i shall arrive in basle on friday morning, so i shall be home somewhere about lunch can you meet me at the station, as i shall have a lot of luggage?
i’ve got some christmas presents for you i’m not going to tell you what your presents are, so it will be a i hope you will like
how are you all at home? i hope you are all keeping see that father always puts on his big coat when he goes out, so that he doesn’t catch i can’t say how much i want to see you and my brother all
love and all good wishes,
kurt
例文二:写求职信的一般模式
dear 1 ,
i would like to apply for a position in your 2 .
i enclose my resume which describes my education and work 3 .
i would appreciate it very much if you could give me a i look forward to your
yours sincerely,
4
上述内容中所填的内容依次是:
① 正确的称谓
② 信息来源及求职原因
③ 具体介绍自己的情况及适合这职位的原因
④ 署名
高三英语作文写作技巧(3)
想写这篇文章,是因为在评改作文的时候,笔者总是看到一些考生在文章的开头使用“It goes without saying that …”或“There’s no denying the fact that …”等套话。还有一些考生使用更长、更复杂的套话,比如,仿照《独立宣言》的首句,写成:“We hold these truths to be self-evident that …”或者仿照简?奥斯丁在小说《傲慢与偏见》中的写法,写成:“It is a truth universally acknowledged that …”笔者经常想,这种只占字数、不表达思想的句子在作文中出现,考官会怎么看?他们会觉得考生的写作水平高吗?考生当然也很无奈:要完成一篇250~300个词的英文文章,如果不写这些套话,要写够字数,还不能写得太简单,那都写什么呀?
看来,问题不在于该不该写这些套话,而在于如果不写套话,那么考生该用什么来取代它们,以使作文简练、流畅而不装腔作势。下面笔者列出几种套话写作的处理方法,和大家共享。
方法一:宁写一词、不写一句
这种方法主要用于替换引言套句。具体的办法是将主题句前面的“It goes without saying that …”“There’s no denying the fact that…”等引言套句换成一个副词,直接引出主题句。比如,考生写一篇关于“互联网”的文章,一般都会习惯性地用引言套句引出主题句,写成:“It goes without saying that the Internet has offered people a way to ”(句子1)还有些担心字数不够的考生甚至把上述句子扩充为:“I’m quite certain that a growing of number of people, youngsters in particular, would agree that the Internet has offered people a way to ”坦率地讲,在最初用英文写作时,笔者也经常用这样的句子,而且每次用心中都会感到一种巨大的“成就感”。但你对英文写作熟悉了之后,就会慢慢发现,上述句子中的“I’m quite certain that a growing number of people, youngsters in particular, would agree that”(句子2)除了占用了你策划主题句的时间,实在没有什么实用价值。
相反,如果写作时不写这样的套句,而直接用副词引出主题句,则不光观点鲜明、结构简练,还能让考官一眼看到主题。以上句为例,我们不如干脆写成:“Undeniably, the Internet has offered people a way to ”(句子3)这岂不更为简练?所以,考生与其花时间去背诵和主题无关的引言,还不如把精力放在主题句本身的锤炼上,完善结构,增加修辞,把主题句写精致。比如上面的句子,我们可以进一步改写成:“Undeniably, the Internet has revolutionized the ways people ”(句子4)大家可以对比一下句子2和句子4,显然句子4的结构和修辞更有英语的韵味。
类似的替换写法很多,以下是一些常用的替换写法,大家可以参考:
“It is an indisputable fact that …”换成“Undeniably, …”
“We hold it truth to be self-evident that …”换成“Evidently, …”
“There’s no denying the fact that …”换成“Undeniably, …”
“It is a well-known fact that …”换成“Not surprisingly, …”
“Even more worrying is the fact that …”换成“Even more disturbingly, …”
“It is obviously that …”换成“Obviously, …”
“It is vitally important that换成“More importantly, …”
方法二:巧用结构,替换空话
诸如“with the development of our society”这样的句子可能是中国考生最爱写的一类套话了。考生通常会把这类套话安排在主题句的前面,美其名曰“先交代时代背景,再引出主题句”。这类套话还会衍生出无数“变种”,比较夸张的写法是:“Along with the dramatic economic growth and groundbreaking social and psychological displacement, there’s an urgent demand that our country have more newspapers and ”看过上千篇“范文”的考官一眼就能看出“Along with the dramatic economic growth and groundbreaking social and psychological displacement, there’s an urgent demand that”是“凑字”的空话。
那么该如何替换这一类空话呢?其中一个办法是使用“……很重要,我们要重视”这样的句子形成主题句,然后对“……很重要,我们要重视”这个意思进行结构变换或修辞处理,使用词和结构更加多样化。下面用语法结构解析的方法来逐一分析“……很重要,我们要重视”的表达方式。
用“主?系?表”结构表达。“主?系?表”结构是英语写作中最为基础的结构,它的基本结构是“名词+be (变形)+形容词”。在用该结构替换上文所述空洞无物的套话时,可以使用“not only +形容词, but also +形容词”结构,比如写成:“… is not only necessary, but also indispensable”,然后后面再补充一句:“and that’s why we are supposed to emphasize its central position in our ”这样就能成功将“随着社会的发展”这一空话替换下来。
用“主?谓?宾”结构表达。上文中的句子还可以这样表达:“… plays a significant part in our society, so it is essential that its position be ”细心的考生可以发现,虽然是表达同一个意思,但“主?系?表”结构和“主?谓?宾”结构采用了不同的句子形式,这两种表达方式都直接、有效。
用否定句和被动语态表达。否定句和被动语态结合起来使用能使表达更加多样,也更具客观性,如:“The central position of … cannot be So we are expected to underscore its importance in our ”
用until正话反说或反话正说。可以用“… has been overlooked until But …”这一句型来为“……很重要,我们要重视”这个意思做铺垫,从而使句意表达更加生动,比如:“The importance of … has been in large measure overlooked until But nowadays, it is not only necessary, but also indispensable in our ”
将“重视”和“重要”的顺序颠倒,先写“重视”,再写“重要”。比如:“We are supposed to emphasize its central position in our society, because it is not only necessary, but also ”
方法三:用好“数据论证”,学会没话找话
“数据论证”这个方法像把双刃剑,一方面它很管用,写得好的话,能形成流畅的论证过程;而另一方面,它有点像“谎话”,如果写不好,数据组织和延伸句之间不通顺,一看就像编“故事”,反而影响成绩。所以,建议经验较丰富的写作“高手”使用该方法。考生在使用这一方法时,可以巧妙地把数据论证和延伸句结合成一个整体。比如,《新概念英语》第三册第九课中, Alexander就曾用数据论证的办法证明“猫有九条命,是摔不死的”:
… they have nine Apparently, there’s a great deal of truth in this A cat’s ability to survive falls is based on Recently, the New York Animal Center made a study of 132 cats over a period of five All these experience have one thing in common: they have fallen off high buildings, yet only eight of them died from shock or
划线部分的句子将研究机构名称、实验数字、实验期限三个要素串接在一起,插接在主题句“they have nine lives”和延伸句“they have fallen off high buildings, yet only eight of them died from shock or injuries”之间,形成了一个有效的铺垫。这种写法虽然有点“耗字数”,但是对于写作时无话可说的考生来说,也不失为一个好的选择。
考生可以仿照上述文章的数据写作方法,采取“机构名称+调查数字+调查期限”的写法写成句子,插接在主题句和延伸句之间。例如,考生可以将中间的铺垫句写成以下形式:
As can be seen in a recent survey by the China Daily, at least three out of every five interviewees believed that +延伸句
Recently the Beijing Youth made a study of 1,132 citizens for a period of two Despite their genders, occupations, religious background, social status and income levels, there is one thing in common: +延伸句
CCTV interviewed five people from five cities—they are from Harbin, Beijing, Tannin, Shanghai and Shenzhen The survey showed that +延伸句, in spite of their birthplace, educational background and socio-economical
高三英语作文写作技巧(4)
英语作文批阅一般遵循三个原则:第一语言要高级,也就是有亮点,不要什么“Whatareyoudoing”,“Mynameis_X”类似的,这不是幼儿英语。第二内容要齐全,给的要求提示都要字文中体现出来。第三文章段落要分清,逻辑有调理性,不能全篇只有一个段落。
既然批卷老师把语言亮点放在第一位,说明它最为重要,也是得分的关键。亮点一共分为四类:1、高级词汇和语法;2、修辞手法;3、合理的连词、副词使用;4、名人名言或者谚语。
下面说一下如何使用这些。
一、肯定不如否定好
修辞手法很少在英文作文中使用,但是它确实一个很好的得分点,难的不会,运用一些简单的即可。就像双重否定表肯定,这也是一种修辞,稍加注意就可以设计出这样的句式。
例如:你想表达“快递员天天准时到”,如果写成The postman comes on time every day,就不如写成双重否定,The postman never fails to come on time,双重否定表示强调作用。
二、能倒装不使用陈述
高中阶段学习的倒装只要求掌握四种:1、否定词开头;2、地点状语开头;3、Only+介词短语;4、形容词+as+主语+be动词。书面表达中老师更喜欢看到这种高级语法,因为这足够可以表现你学习的程度是怎么样的。
三、能被动的不主动
阅卷老师表示考生很少在文中使用被动语态,这也是受中文较严重,我们日常对话都是主动形式,用被动句感觉会非常奇怪。英语是经常用物或形式主语开头,强调发生在什么人身上,所以英文当中的被动语态是非常重要。
四、有分词结构
在所有的高级语法中,阅卷老师最喜欢看到独立主格和分词结构,其中所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构,时间状语从句,原因状语,条件状语等。
考生要在作文中设计出阅卷老师眼前一亮的句子,这样整篇文章才会不单一,有效的连贯起来,老师才更愿意给你高分。
高三英语作文写作技巧(5)
一、议论文
议论文要求学生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来发表自己的看法。一般来说,议论文由论点、论据、论证三部分组成。要做到:1)论点要正确无误。2)论据要可靠充分。论据可以是人们公认的真理,也可以是经过实践考证的经典著作。3)论证要合理严密。人们常用的论证方法有归纳法、推理法、对比法。议论文一般按提出问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排层次。
(一)议论文的写作步骤
1、引言(introduction):由于英语作文受时间、字数的限制,因此,在引言段中作者就
必须简单解释要讨论的问题,并明白地亮出自己的观点,如提倡什么,支持什么,反对
什么等。
2、展开段(supporting sentences):展开段是议论的过程,作者必须有足够的证据(adequate
proofs)来论证自己的观点。一般可提出一个或两个proofs, 并对此用一两句话分别进行
阐述。
3、结论(conclusion):结论段可以用一两句话来结束文章。同时要注意与引言段呼应,
但不能照搬前面的原话。
(二)议论文的类型
英语议论文根据命题特点,从形式上来看可分为如下类型:
1、对问题“一分为二”的观点。这类文章大多结合当前时事,要求学生就某种现象谈其利弊。如“轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境、经济可能产生的影响”。此类文章的模式及套语如下,仅供参考:
第一段:nowadays more and more people…/… plays an important part in… like everything else… has /have both favorable and unfavorable aspects (both advantages and disadvantages). generally, the favorable aspects (advantages) can be listed as 第二段:
first…secondly…in addition(what’s more)…
第三段:
every coin has two the negative aspects (advantages) are also apparent (obvious). to begin with… to make matters worse… worst of all…
第四段:
through above analysis/all things considered, we can see that the positive aspects(advantages) outweigh the negative aspects(disadvantages). therefore …
范文:讨论电脑的利弊。
computers are playing a more and more important role in modern they are widely used almost in every field, such as business, transportation and we use computers to process and store all kinds of also, they are entering ordinary we use computers to control electrical appliances and to entertain ourselves by playing games on without computers, the world would not be what it is
in spite of this, computers cause for instance, a great system will break down when only a single computer goes it is possible that somebody breaks into a computer system to steal secret we cannot rely so much on
so we should develop more advanced and reliable computers in order to make our life more colorful and
2、“两者选一”的观点。这要求学生在a和b之间作一选择或比较,如“乘火车还是乘飞机”。
第一段:
some people hold the opinion that (a) is superior to (b) in many others , however, argue that (b) is much personally, i would prefer (a) because (a) has more
第二段:
there are many reasons why i prefer (a). the main reason is that …. another reason is that…
第三段:
of course, choosing (b) also has advantages to some (give one or two advantages of b)
第四段:but if all these factors are considered, (a) is much better that (b).from what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that…
3、“我认为……”即“我的观点”型。如“一些学生喜欢拿自己的同学开恶作剧的玩笑,谈谈你的看法。”
some of the students around us like playing practical jokes on others at school, but frankly speaking, i don’t think it’s wise to do this kind of thing, for they often lead to a lot of
in my opinion, playing tricks on your classmates might ruin the friendship between you and your as young students, we sometimes do something only for fun without thinking of others’ playing some jokes may more or less hurt your
what’s more, playing tricks on others may do harm to their the victims of the jokes might suffer from severe pain not only mentally but also
last but not least, humor has been well defined as thinking in fun while feeling in
if a person wants to make true friends, he must learn to foster the friendship which can enrich his he should learn to treat his friends sincerely and frankly, to give advice and to help whenever they need but never to` play meaningless practical jokes on them .
4、图表作文。图表式作文通过阅读图表中的数字与项目得出一个结论或形成一种看法。写作要点:不需要把表中的数据一一列出,只要选几个有代表性的数据加以叙述并结合数据抓住实质简而议之。
下面的模式可供参考:
模式一:
第一段:
… is known as one of the most serious problems in today’s world, as is shown in the grapy,/according to the figures shown in the grapy,(表述图表中的数字)
第二段:
(陈述理由)furthermore,(继续陈述理由) as a result,(引起的后果…的减少或增长)(…experiencing a decrease/increase)
第三段:so i believe…will be achieved through efforts of every
模式二:
第一段:
from…we can see the increase/decrease(描述数字的句型)…was/added up to(数字) in(时间), while it increased/decreasedto(数字and数字) in (时间and时间) therefore, it can be predicted that …will further increase/decrease (is/are to be on the rise/decrease) in the
第二段:
there are chiefly three reasons for the firstly…secondly…, apart from the above reasons…
第三段:
in spite of what is mentioned above, there are still… the grapy/table indicted… hence, the situation is still serious and how to …is still a challenging
5、看图写话。根据图画写故事,伴之以简单议论或者简述图画内容,透过现象看本质,以议论为主。
以_年的高考作文为例。图片上女儿在学骑自行车,奶奶、父亲和一手拿着急救箱的母亲三人满头大汗地扶着车,深怕女儿摔着了。图片下有一行字:你们让我自己骑好吗?这仍是一个涉及到孩子怎样独立的问题。此类文章可采用以下的模式:
outline the reasons/the cause of the
many ways can be used to solve this serious problem, but the following ones may be
first of all…besides…/another way to solve the problem of …is…finally…
from my experience, i feel there is no shortcut in doing maybe these are not the best
or only measures we can but it should be noted that we should take great pains to…
高三英语作文写作技巧(6)
1、称谓:
无职衔的男子: wang/zhang
已婚女子:mrs wang/zhao
未婚女子:miss wang/zhang
博士: zhang
教授: lin
还有一些表示感情色彩的词。
如:dear smith/dear madam/dear sir
2、正文
正文要从称谓的下一行写起,可以和称谓齐头写,也可以向内缩五个字母写。正文就是要具体地写你想表达的内容,要注意表达清楚、简练,让收信人很容易得知你要表达的内容。
3、结束语:
结束语写在正文的下方,另起一行。常用的结束语有:
best wishes!/ good luck!/give my best wishes to your family!/looking forward to your reply!
4、签名:
sincerely yours/yours sincerely/truly yours/yours respectfully/respectfully yours
例文一:下面是一个叫kurt的人写给父母的家书。
17th
dear mother and father,
i feel very excited at the thought that in another week i shall be with you again on i have enjoyed my stay in england very much dowson and my fellow students are all very nice to but, as they say in england, “there’s no place like home,” and i think one feels this above all at christmas
i am leaving here early on thursday, the 23rd, and i shall arrive in basle on friday morning, so i shall be home somewhere about lunch can you meet me at the station, as i shall have a lot of luggage?
i’ve got some christmas presents for you i’m not going to tell you what your presents are, so it will be a i hope you will like
how are you all at home? i hope you are all keeping see that father always puts on his big coat when he goes out, so that he doesn’t catch i can’t say how much i want to see you and my brother all
love and all good wishes,
kurt
例文二:写求职信的一般模式
dear 1 ,
i would like to apply for a position in your 2 .
i enclose my resume which describes my education and work 3 .
i would appreciate it very much if you could give me a i look forward to your
yours sincerely,
4
上述内容中所填的内容依次是:
① 正确的称谓
② 信息来源及求职原因
③ 具体介绍自己的情况及适合这职位的原因
④ 署名
高三英语作文写作技巧(7)
一、如何写长难句
How to develop complex
写出key words,确认中心骨架
逻辑排列,logical arrangements
加工润色,colorize
例句:大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
Most of (A majority of) students believe (hold the view) that part-time jobs can provide them with opportunities机会to/and develop (improve/better) communication ability能力(social abilities/interpersonal skills人际关系技巧),which is good for (is beneficial to有益于) their looking for jobs (job-hunting求职) in the future (after their graduation).
二、拓展长句的三大方法
The most important factor因素 we have to take into consideration is …
The most important thing I want to talk about is that… that…
It is also of great importance to pay close attention to…that
Besides what is mentioned above上诉的,it is necessary to think about…
In addition to除…之外 what is talked about above, I want to tell you about…
写引导词:包括起承转合例(让句子变得高端)
起: in the first place首先, first and foremost首要的, to begin/start with
承: second (ly),in the second place, furthermore而且,此外, moreover而且,此外, what’s more, in addition另外, besides
转:but, however, on the contrary与此相反, in contrast/comparison相比之下, nonetheless虽然如此,但是; nevertheless尽管如此,然而;
合: last but not least最后同样重要的,so, therefore,
in conclusion最后,综上所述, to conclude最后, in a/one word, in general,
例: for instance, for example, such as,
When it comes 说起…
经典引导句型
There is no doubt that/in saying that…
There is no exaggeration夸张 in saying that…
It is known to us all that,
It is well-known that…
It is apparent/obvious显然的 that…it is not hard to understand that…
It is not too much to say that…
It is commonly/widely/generally agreed that… (acknowledged公认的 that…/ believed that)
写插入语(让句子变得客观)
that is to say
to a certain extent在某种程度上,to some degree在一定程度上,to a larger degree在很大程度上
for one reason or another因为某种原因, to put it in another way换言之
directly or indirectly 直接或间接
in other words 换句话说
as a matter of fact 事实上
例:English is, to a large degree, be后
Computer, directly or indirectly, influences our 行前
Computer can, as a matter of fact, influence our 助行间
例句:It is known to us all that, English is, to a large degree, very important due to that English is becoming a global/world /is becoming more and more (increasingly) popular
There is no doubt in saying that computer, directly or indirectly, to a large degree, influences our life primarily owing to that (computer can make our work and study faster) computer can improve the efficiency of our work and
It is hard to understand that doing part-time job can, to a large extent, broaden our horizon in that we can understand more about the society by knowing a lot of
写从句(让句子变得漫长)
名词性定语从句:that, who
时间状语从句:before, when, after, during
地点状语从句:where)
原因状语从句:because, because of
primarily/mainly owing to that,
partly/partially due to that,
in that 例: I like you in that you are very
假设状语从句:if, on condition that… in case that…